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Monday, 16 August 2021

Story Starters

 Story Starters

Here is a blog post about my Story starter for this week. A story starter is when there is a sentence to start our story and today mine was in the deep dark woods. I hope you enjoy reading my story starter for this week.    


In The Deep Dark Woods


There stood a deer

Then there was a rustle in the spooky old trees

I was wondering what that rustle was

Suddenly a owl swooped my hair

I screamed and ran out of the woods


My friend Bridie rated my story starter and she gave it a 8/10. I thought that was pretty good, but you should give me some feedback is a blog comment. Thanks for reading my blog post and just remember this story isn't real.      

 

 

  


 

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  1. Anonymous16 August 2021 at 11:21

    Hi Kyla-Rose.
    Just so you know,Well you do know,Your blog post was great.I loved how you made it rhyme at the beginning and the end.I can't think of what to say for you to improve on because it is so great.Did you enjoy writing it.
    ALOHA:BRIDIE

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