Within L3 Reading
Last week in reading group we read a book called Bok Choy. We had to write a retail about the book. This is my retail.
Jacob was helping his mother some firewood. Then came Uh Sum selling his Bok Choy. Suddenly we found out Mrs Bishop was not nice, and did not say nice things.
Jacob decided that he wanted to go fishing. Jacob went to the cold routh river. He slipped on the slippery rocks and fell into the river. Uh Sum saw Jacob and saved him. Next minute Jacob knew he was in Uh Sums hut.
Then his mother came to collect Jacob. Jacob and his mother went home. The saw Mrs Bishop and she was talking trash about Jacob.
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